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UsedCreation
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The writing really just breathes life into my characters who seem so emotionally dead and I love how it is being portrayed so far. The plot is a tad confusing as of the first 12 chapters but I can see it developing really well. Traveling to wherever those flames take them, finding ways to slow or completely rid MC of the Hollowing curse, while going through worlds and building bonds to restore one's humanity. Might not even be what the Author is going for but the possible outcomes are exciting. Great story and great writing. Keep up the good work

Forgotten Souls (JJK)

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ImSadge
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Nice. I really appreciate the review. Idk if the audience on this platform will like this or not seeing as my fanfic didn't get the attention most usually do.

UsedCreation
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It's just the lack of word count, otherwise everyone reading this now was looking for something like this on purpose. You'll get a bigger audience over time, just keep on writing and trust it'll pay off. Your writing skills are really good, just some motivation and a little help will take it very far, you're doing great man

ImSadge:Nice. I really appreciate the review. Idk if the audience on this platform will like this or not seeing as my fanfic didn't get the attention most usually do.