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Item: The Retired Hero is an Extra
Rating: 4

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The way the story is written is a little difficult to follow. We need more information on the background. Love the dual main character. Good over all. Maybe add small dialogs about what other characters think of jash. What ever happened to the kings suspicions?

The Retired Hero is an Extra

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The Emperor's suspicions aren't forgotten by me, just not the write time to keep mentioning them🤷🏻‍♂️ Though I did give a hint about it in the latter chapters, try finding it, it's already there!! Thanks for your other points, I'll keep them in mind

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