Review Detail of STEVIOL_GLY in The Vengeful Lion of House Lannister

the story is good, it has its ups and downs, but till now, the ups diminishes the downs. its nothing outstanding yet just a story of happenings during tywin's rise as a lord from heir. i disliked the sex part, but it was not a lot and did not go as long that it ruins or dominates the story, so it remained one of the few smut scenes I like in a novel. hope it stays as it is, and the comment ideas are not picked up like tywinX his fucking sister, like wtf are your comments you porn addicts