Writing quality 3/5: could be better, but it is enough. Updating Stability 3/5: Doubtful. Story Development 1/5: From the first chapter to the last one (Chapter 9), the story has not advanced... Literally, he is still on the same stage. Character design 2/5: Almost nothing is known about the protagonist, I say almost, because I hope that the information we were given is not all that the protagonist is. World background 3/5: It's One Piece, the world fund is decent, much more considering that this time the story takes place some time ago before the canon, which creates some excitement waiting for what will follow. Final Review 2.4 It could be better, really, it could be, but it's not. Although there are at least only 9 chapters for now, perhaps all these aspects will improve in the future. Keep up the good work author!
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