Review Detail of MagnuS in Pokemon- World's 'Strongest' Trainer

after reading 10 chapters of this fanfiction, I can see that calling this fanfiction subapr is a genuine insult to actual subpar ff. The author simply gives the main character a system that gives him everything on a silver platter without any actual effort. The mcs character is a John dove without any actual character traits that differentiate him from anyone else. We immediately start with him already having lived a life in Galar that we did not see at all. the opening chapter has his pokemon, which he raised up from the beginning die. yet somehow, he did not actually view them as actual living beings for 17 years. The characters are way too trusting, like oak, for example. he let him live in his own lab without fact-checking who he was and why he got so near his lab. especially when he was fighting a moltres so close and had his pokemon commit suicide to save him. there's also the fact that the mc is a pale white e-boy with white hair lmfao. the characters are dry and boring to read. the pokemon interactions even more so. All I have to say is that this needs to be redone from the beginning. it needs quite a bit of work to say the least.