Review Detail of Kamikaze_Eagle in Naruto: The Hima clan

It's alright. Not bad, but not great either. The dialogue felt a bit stiff and didn't flow quite as smoothly as it should have. A few points made me wonder if they made sense or not. Like the MC being told there was iron near his new territory. By itself it's not a big deal but he from the context in the story it seems like there was hardly any time for anyone to go prospecting for ores or minerals. Another was when everyone was seemingly confused by the Naras genius plan. It literally only consisted of having a frontline battle with a group targeting the enemies rear. Nothing complex at all.