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1emanresU
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As of chapter 8, I take back my positive review, it doesn't matter if it's readable if what I'm reading is trash. The author keeps twisting lore and writing every character and organisation as egoless mannequins that only exist to give the MC what he wants, it's just plot convenience after plot convenience, and doesn't read like a lively story, it's just a list of them MC going around shopping.

Star Wars: Senator

L0rds2278

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L0rds2278
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Same with buisness, we know what ships costs but not how well troops are paid, what they require and all that, if anyone knows more about it then I do then please tell me, I’m listening and have already changed 4-5 things according to you guys’ information and improving

Tyler_Henline_7485
Tyler_Henline_7485Lv4Tyler_Henline_7485

is there a love interest

L0rds2278:Same with buisness, we know what ships costs but not how well troops are paid, what they require and all that, if anyone knows more about it then I do then please tell me, I’m listening and have already changed 4-5 things according to you guys’ information and improving
OddOne99
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Don’t listen to these naysayers, write what you want, you’re doing a great job. 😁👍

L0rds2278:Same with buisness, we know what ships costs but not how well troops are paid, what they require and all that, if anyone knows more about it then I do then please tell me, I’m listening and have already changed 4-5 things according to you guys’ information and improving