Review Detail of tido_racks in INFINITY STONES IN MHA

I would say the story has a very interesting premise and has a lot of potential but you only lack when it comes to the structure of sentences and conveying what exactly is going on, so I would suggest hiring a good editor and rewriting the story, not a full blown rewrite but adjusting the chapters but I won’t lie if you were to explain things more and were able to give us a better picture of the events going on, this could be a toptier fanfiction, like for example how he looks, skin tone, hair color, parents looks, add pov for certain characters, an explanation for why he’s doing things, an explanation for who exactly certain characters are rather than noting them in passing