Review Detail of Shanmay in INFINITY STONES IN MHA

Okay so I have just finished reading 4th chapter. And, well, I can say that at least the idea of the ff is intriguing. Grammar is decent. Sometimes I feel like there are too many repetetive words in neighboring sentences. Definitely need to check conditionals’ rules and, at least, just look through English punctuation. Speech is a bit “sturdy” and way too “official”. You should add more conversational words, more phrasal verbs, more synonyms so to avoid repetitions, and maybe consider adding some literary receptions( like comparison, metaphor, exaggeration, and etc). Overall, I would say nice ff but there is still room for improvement.