I know right some times I surprise myself, this story has nothing to criticize it is all just bad the chapters are short, the characters don't feel like themselves, you made it An "AU" and only aged up 1 Character, The MC doesn't act like someone in her situation should. do you want me to go on?
ArtoriaPendragon_:Nice review lol. Very constructiveđ
As for the mc acting like someone in her situation, you can attribute her calmness to her new knowledge. Having the knowledge of someone whoâs been through way weirder (AKA Gwen Stacy) makes it hard to be surprised by such things. And what would freaking out do? It wouldnât help anyone. And readers donât like reading about an mc freaking out about their situation and reincarnation. Basically, most of your criticisms are fixed if you had read farther into the fic (as in like 10 chapters instead of seemingly 2-3).
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thehater:I know right some times I surprise myself, this story has nothing to criticize it is all just bad the chapters are short, the characters don't feel like themselves, you made it An "AU" and only aged up 1 Character, The MC doesn't act like someone in her situation should. do you want me to go on?
thehater:I know right some times I surprise myself, this story has nothing to criticize it is all just bad the chapters are short, the characters don't feel like themselves, you made it An "AU" and only aged up 1 Character, The MC doesn't act like someone in her situation should. do you want me to go on?
ArtoriaPendragon_:As for the mc acting like someone in her situation, you can attribute her calmness to her new knowledge. Having the knowledge of someone whoâs been through way weirder (AKA Gwen Stacy) makes it hard to be surprised by such things. And what would freaking out do? It wouldnât help anyone. And readers donât like reading about an mc freaking out about their situation and reincarnation. Basically, most of your criticisms are fixed if you had read farther into the fic (as in like 10 chapters instead of seemingly 2-3).
ArtoriaPendragon_:Ah, Nevermind. I just looked at your username and profile, youâre literally just a trollimage
Then you werenât properly reading then lol. AU aspects are already propping up, and even more are popping up in recent chapters
thehater:I read all the chapters that were out when I posted this so no it was not fixed.
nope I read it alright. and I am not a troll I'm a hater get it right. "all trolls are haters but not all haters are trolls- thehater"
ArtoriaPendragon_:Then you werenât properly reading then lol. AU aspects are already propping up, and even more are popping up in recent chapters
No, you obviously didnât lol. And youâre a troll when you leave a review with no criticism, and the âcriticismâ you do have, is addressed/fixed within like 5-6 chapters.
thehater:nope I read it alright. and I am not a troll I'm a hater get it right. "all trolls are haters but not all haters are trolls- thehater"
What wasnât fixed? Iâd be interested to know. As from what I can tell, every criticism youâve had, has all been fixed.
ArtoriaPendragon_:No, you obviously didnât lol. And youâre a troll when you leave a review with no criticism, and the âcriticismâ you do have, is addressed/fixed within like 5-6 chapters.