Review Detail of LazyPen_Smith in The Billionaire's Proposal {A Fake Engagement}

So far, no grammatical errors at all. And the plot seems nice. In my opinion, I'd love to see when Jazmyne becomes Ms. Ryder. Shawn's mother should just tell death to wait since her daughter-in-law is on the way. Also, from what I researched from Google, a pink star is estimated to be worth $71 million. Why doesn't she just sell the ring to make up the money?