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TheUngod
TheUngodAutor6mthTheUngod

Obligatory shameless author review! This is my second official book, and I am taking this one much more seriously than my last one as I made some bad mistakes with that one that unfortunately led to it being dropped. But I learned a lot from writing my previous book and I'm putting my all into this novel from this point onwards! Happy reading!

Primordial Expanse: I have the Strongest Talent!

TheUngod

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Daoist_of_torment
Daoist_of_tormentLv4Daoist_of_torment

author does he get smarter or remains same

Im_LaZy_007
Im_LaZy_007Lv12Im_LaZy_007

bro, is this harem or Single female lead?🙏

TheUngod
TheUngodAutorTheUngod

Single fl

Im_LaZy_007:bro, is this harem or Single female lead?🙏
Im_LaZy_007
Im_LaZy_007Lv12Im_LaZy_007

cool 👍

TheUngod:Single fl
IFuckedJadeBeauty
IFuckedJadeBeautyLv13IFuckedJadeBeauty

hello, is he op or slightly stronger than average mobs?

TheUngod
TheUngodAutorTheUngod

A bit of both

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daoistkitty
daoistkittyLv15daoistkitty

Did you take inspiration from another book? One that has the word slave in it? Cause outside of the setting and the background of the MC, it’s very similar. Was that on purpose or coincidence?

TheUngod
TheUngodAutorTheUngod

read the auxiliary chapter

daoistkitty:Did you take inspiration from another book? One that has the word slave in it? Cause outside of the setting and the background of the MC, it’s very similar. Was that on purpose or coincidence?
daoistkitty
daoistkittyLv15daoistkitty

Thank you for pointing that out. I just jumped into the book and the Aux chapter was skipped by the app so I didn’t see it. Thank you for clearing that up. Though I will say it’s really similar and feel like that meme “you can copy my homework, but don’t copy it word for word”. I think if the first chapter was shorter and focused on the character and/or setting more then the second chapter being the first chapter would have made things smoother, but that is hindsight at work

TheUngod:read the auxiliary chapter
_Soy_Sauce_
_Soy_Sauce_Lv14_Soy_Sauce_

I read this as ‘single for life’ and my heart dropped😂😂😂

TheUngod:Single fl
wrongaccounttt
wrongaccountttLv13wrongaccounttt

Thank God, I would I hated to drop this if it was harem, I can't stand the harem genre.

TheUngod:Single fl
Elena_Hernandez_2928
Elena_Hernandez_2928Lv3Elena_Hernandez_2928

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DarknorthDao
DarknorthDaoLv15DarknorthDao

Just one question. Does the mc conform to the dystopia or does he not.

yours_truly_reader
yours_truly_readerLv3yours_truly_reader

dumb forever

Daoist_of_torment:author does he get smarter or remains same
Reinjeloh_Arodner
Reinjeloh_ArodnerLv3Reinjeloh_Arodner

does this novel has a harem for the mc to have in the future ?

pb_jelly
pb_jellyLv15pb_jelly

he is stupid and just makes dumb choices. Definitely living up to be a teenager

IFuckedJadeBeauty:hello, is he op or slightly stronger than average mobs?
pb_jelly
pb_jellyLv15pb_jelly

does the story get better during the school arc? the cave arc ended horribly, the mc literally just left the enemies body and didn't even try to get anything from that fight. I'm tired of spending money on so many junk chapters. the cave arc ruined this for me.

OtakuRimuru
OtakuRimuruLv2OtakuRimuru

lol😂

_Soy_Sauce_:I read this as ‘single for life’ and my heart dropped😂😂😂
king_of_dragon
king_of_dragonLv2king_of_dragon

i am happy if he is single or has a single wife but multiple just makes the story go bad with focus on cleaning their mess up and is just an all around nuisance

Azrael_Astaroth
Azrael_AstarothLv2Azrael_Astaroth

don't write Maria story it's boring

TheUngod:Single fl