Review Detail of Twilight_Lord in Return of the Demonic Emperor!

First of all thanks! For keeping alive my character through your work. Crazy Necromancer in the ruined tower was my first work and I had completely ruined it! There were so many plot holes that by the time I realized it, it wasn't possible to correct them, so I dropped that book. I have been reading Ember's work, he had implemented the world-building of my book, well not only implemented but he had improved it! He is doing a great job, I hope he can write just as good of a novel. Give it a try - you might be surprised!