Review Detail of fat_gamer in The strongest human is a cheater

The story has an interesting premise as it would help it stand out in quite a saturated genre. Adding a prologue is quite useful as a hook (I'm going to steal the idea hehe). As another review has mentioned, working on your grammar and punctuation would help the readability of the story. Just spacing the paragraphs correctly will be helpful in it being easy on the eyes. Try to move the story forward with dialogue or at least inner thoughts instead of pure narration. For example, in the first 2 chapters, instead of the MC narrating his own personality and character, it's more enjoyable for the reader if they make those inferences through dialogue or story. You can use sites like grammarly or other AI powered tools to help make your story more readable, this would also help you understand and learn faster . TLDR; great potential, could use better english