The story has great potential, but the author should refrain from using the old cliche scenes lol. The writing is not bad, maybe some grammatical errors. Other than these small things, the story looks awesome. Keep up your good work, author.
Ranch64
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MÖGENdon't need to be sorry bro. even I'm like that when I start writing. For grammar, try using grammarly. I always use it when editing. it helps a lot.
Ranch64:Thanks. I am new to writing novels, so sorry for my bad writing. I guess, I should refrain from using cliché scenes.image
Ak02:don't need to be sorry bro. even I'm like that when I start writing. For grammar, try using grammarly. I always use it when editing. it helps a lot.