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mercurystarship
mercurystarshipLv27mthmercurystarship

Okay, I gave it an honest shot, wasn't expecting too much. The writing seems a bit immature, just not my thing. P.S.: Author, my review isn't meant to troll you, just sharing my honest opinion. Feel free to remove it if you'd like.

Spider-Man 0X

Xcalibur_Xc

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CrazyFishDoggo
CrazyFishDoggoLv14CrazyFishDoggo

>.> The fact that people still think Yuri is NTR in a harem is silly to me. Have they ever had sex? Do they know how tiring it is to please one person throughly? Like I get the male power fantasy of beautiful women everywhere, but in reality, one guy can't do it alone. idk bout you, gentlemen, but I enjoy a little Yuri in my life. poly.

Haku_Ouroboros:nd Yuri ntr 🤮
Xcalibur_Xc
Xcalibur_XcAutorXcalibur_Xc

Everyone got their own tastes, I can respect that. Thanks. Atleast you didn't try to troll like most who leaves a ff and drops review just for fun.

mercurystarship
mercurystarshipLv2mercurystarship

Dude, I've read almost 20 chapters, and I gotta say, you've got some writing chops. When I say it's not mature, it's not about the quality of your writing but more about how the story feels a bit unfocused even after all those chapters. It needs some setup to really grab attention. If you work on that, I bet it could skyrocket in quality. Best of luck with your writing journey ahead!

Xcalibur_Xc:Everyone got their own tastes, I can respect that. Thanks. Atleast you didn't try to troll like most who leaves a ff and drops review just for fun.
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4Haku_Ouroboros

nd Yuri ntr 🤮

tychin787
tychin787Lv13tychin787

it has Yuri n ntr??

Haku_Ouroboros:nd Yuri ntr 🤮
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4Haku_Ouroboros

yses

tychin787:it has Yuri n ntr??
Haruto17
Haruto17Lv4Haruto17

where's the ntr part??

Haku_Ouroboros:yses
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4Haku_Ouroboros

deje de leer cuando el autor confirmó que habría Yuri en el harem

Haruto17:where's the ntr part??
The_Zombies
The_ZombiesLv1The_Zombies

no ntr, there isn't even a yuri scene. Author said, he might add yuri during threesome scenes.

tychin787:it has Yuri n ntr??
IamLegend_X
IamLegend_XLv1IamLegend_X

Stop spreading false information.

Haku_Ouroboros:yses
IamLegend_X
IamLegend_XLv1IamLegend_X

No. If threesome or foursome with girls and MC is considered ntr in your view, then you better avoid it.😂😂

tychin787:it has Yuri n ntr??
IamLegend_X
IamLegend_XLv1IamLegend_X

There isn't any ntr as far as I've read. If you think a threesome scene with two girls and MC is considered ntr, then I don't know what to say.

Haruto17:where's the ntr part??
IamLegend_X
IamLegend_XLv1IamLegend_X

Yuri isn't ntr. And Author mentioned some girl action during 3some segs with MC. It's not like they are doing it behind him. You bunch of insecure kids. I feel sorry for you.

Haku_Ouroboros:deje de leer cuando el autor confirmó que habría Yuri en el harem
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4Haku_Ouroboros

Tipical çuck

IamLegend_X:Yuri isn't ntr. And Author mentioned some girl action during 3some segs with MC. It's not like they are doing it behind him. You bunch of insecure kids. I feel sorry for you.