Okay, I gave it an honest shot, wasn't expecting too much. The writing seems a bit immature, just not my thing. P.S.: Author, my review isn't meant to troll you, just sharing my honest opinion. Feel free to remove it if you'd like.
Xcalibur_Xc
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MÖGEN>.> The fact that people still think Yuri is NTR in a harem is silly to me. Have they ever had sex? Do they know how tiring it is to please one person throughly? Like I get the male power fantasy of beautiful women everywhere, but in reality, one guy can't do it alone. idk bout you, gentlemen, but I enjoy a little Yuri in my life. poly.
Haku_Ouroboros:nd Yuri ntr 🤮
Dude, I've read almost 20 chapters, and I gotta say, you've got some writing chops. When I say it's not mature, it's not about the quality of your writing but more about how the story feels a bit unfocused even after all those chapters. It needs some setup to really grab attention. If you work on that, I bet it could skyrocket in quality. Best of luck with your writing journey ahead!
Xcalibur_Xc:Everyone got their own tastes, I can respect that. Thanks. Atleast you didn't try to troll like most who leaves a ff and drops review just for fun.
No. If threesome or foursome with girls and MC is considered ntr in your view, then you better avoid it.😂😂
tychin787:it has Yuri n ntr??
There isn't any ntr as far as I've read. If you think a threesome scene with two girls and MC is considered ntr, then I don't know what to say.
Haruto17:where's the ntr part??
Yuri isn't ntr. And Author mentioned some girl action during 3some segs with MC. It's not like they are doing it behind him. You bunch of insecure kids. I feel sorry for you.
Haku_Ouroboros:deje de leer cuando el autor confirmó que habría Yuri en el harem
IamLegend_X:Yuri isn't ntr. And Author mentioned some girl action during 3some segs with MC. It's not like they are doing it behind him. You bunch of insecure kids. I feel sorry for you.