Review Detail of Kont_Archimedes in Magic Chronicles : Fallen Race

Thanks for your review, First, Mc is indeed evil, not the hard one, but someone who killed 1000 humans in 1 chapter, corrupting one of the most inoccent race as his, and playing with the life of the royal family, and i think you didn't reach Demon King Tower arc or Illinor Massacre arc, or even his first war agints humans, or even why he dislike Wieked demon Lordan, he didn't hate Lordan because he is a demon, he know what he was doing just from Eileen's discribing his action the past 1000 years. And indeed, he is not sided with demon, and of course not humans, or elves, or beastmens. Reviewing from just 16 chapters is kida... how to say... anyway.

And people who read because of the tag, i don't think they will rate it based on the first 16 chapters.

You really have problems as a writer. I read all the chapters that are free to read, not the 16 chapters, and you couldn't convince me to continue reading it! I don't have to do any good to you and keep reading the paid chapters just because maybe this garbage MC will get better, no one is! First, learn that this is a business and plan accordingly. In the free chapters you don't give the slightest hint of his evil side. Then you claim that I will get better results if you read more and pay??? You should have at least written a warning somewhere, my friend. Oh you are so newbie. Anyway, as I mentioned in the review, I said he wasn't evil as a demon king, he was just an anti-hero with his own sense of morality. I don't know if it will change in the future, it was not clear from what I read. Frankly, you didn't give much reason for it to change in the future. Maybe you should increase the number of free chapters or put a warning that he's a slow-developing villain. Either way, I'm still sure he's not evil.

Would things have changed if I had read all the free chapters, that is, 19 chapters, instead of 16? LoL

Indeed, my bad this time, i asked my editor to change it to 29 the day it closed, but sadly couldn't due to some rules in the contract. As for chapter 16, it shows in my part that the last chapter you read before making the review was 16.