Review Detail of Pragmatico in Tower defense: Sacrificial tome from the start!

Read what was free and stopped. Grammar is ok but needs to be edited. At times the MC is called Lucas and it states tower points instead of exp when he kills enemies. The flow of the sentences at times is off and could be worded better. Analogies don’t normally translate so well so google some to make the story more relatable. MC is very generic and has nothing outstanding so far besides seeing vitality or life force. He doesnt even use the tome( not tomb by the way) beside twice and it’s in the story title. He has been there 3 days plus that 3 points he could have spent and gained back but nope he just sits and meditates. The world background is also completely a mystery at this time. Characters can’t even visit each other or form groups for mutual aid. There is no geography to speak of and weather seems to be constantly cloudy and sunny. Updates are unstable as well so far with about one chapter every few days from posting history so far. Wish you luck though