Review Detail of XanaTrygg in Manipulator Of Space With Mage Leveling System

I loved how you gave a summary on the world's events in the first chapter, because it gave me a better understanding of the story and even made me curious to keep reading!! Also, I honestly didn't notice this was a reincarnation story, so it caught me off guard the beginning of the second chapter hahahaha. I liked how you wrote that. Your world is well thought with a lot of details and relation with our reality, so it's more relatable and easy to imagine to happen in the future! Nice job!