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There may not be a lot of chapters, but I think the book has a lot of potential. Plus, it's rare to find a fanfic about Hades, so I have quite the expectations. So far, the book has had excellent grammar and the author seems to be trying to make it easy to read as well. The one thing I'll say is that I'm not the biggest fan of how the Narrator's POV sometimes sounds overly casual with things like 'Titan tummy' being used. For character POV it's not a big deal since it can be treated as the character's thoughts. Either way, I'm looking forward to more chapters, author!
Hades : The god of Hell
Fanfiction_Lover08
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It's not too bad but it is noticeable. I'm still enjoying the read and am looking forward to more author, please keep up the good work!! 👍
Fanfiction_Lover08:Thanks for the review and yes I am thinking that I was trying to make it way more casual than it should be so thanks for the telling me that
To each their own. I'm fine when it comes to character POVs, not the biggest fan but still better than other fanfics I've seen. However, the reason I called out the Narrator's POV is because I feel like the narrator should be objective and flat toned, unless ur going the comedy route like Kaguya-Sama Love is War. It doesn't seem like that's the route the author is going for, nor would I recommend it since this isn't a primarily slice of life fanfic, hence why I called out the Narrator's POV. Again, just my opinion.
Yeah_E_7311:I agree except I like the narrator’s pov.