Review Detail of DaoistW40miC in A Blind Man In Twilight

Good story, I like the powers, the characters, the only problem I have is that it is a little too slow paced. Like I get that you need to explain his life , his family and the characters( especially for people that are not familiar with Twilight for which i thank you ) , and I get that life is mostly boring stuff that sometimes has bits of action but in 12 chapters, aside from the part of him showing his "gifts" in the accident and Alice's yandereism there is not much exciting stuff for now. I understand that is yet to come since we didn't meet shapeshifters and werewolves yet or get more into the Twilight plot. So I still have high hopes for improvement.