the story is good but nothing mind blowing. There are 3 main problems keeping it from perfection 1) the status is absolute mess, like sometimes its lower or higher than before 2) author doesnt go back to fix mistakes even when somebody point them out 3) MC makes illogical decisions which author states are for future plot
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MÖGENPpp_Pppp:When I have time I usually go back and fix it but recently I have been getting busy and busy so I can’t really fix that and as for Kenzo decision Heh,most of them make sense if you put yourself in his shoes
Haaah nvm it’s maki can’t y’all do something original like every author on here who does jjk only picks maki
DaoistOfeOTA:Can u say who is fl? (Nobara hopefully?)
Ppp_Pppp:When I have time I usually go back and fix it but recently I have been getting busy and busy so I can’t really fix that and as for Kenzo decision Heh,most of them make sense if you put yourself in his shoes
what's wrong with Maki? her and Mei Mei are the hottest in JJK, maybe Mai too, there aren't a lot of good options in the world of JJK - sure, most of the other ladies aren't bad, but I would prefer a strong one too - Maki is perfect
DaoistOfeOTA:Haaah nvm it’s maki can’t y’all do something original like every author on here who does jjk only picks maki