Review Detail of Blueman97 in A Modern Man's Fate

honestly this lost my interest in the third chapter in the second chapter they are talking to the mc as if they know his future the dialogue feels unnatural, there is no development of character in the second chapter or third with the mother and sister is as if they only know how to kingdom business. What I mean is that there no natural feeling to how a family should feel. Then the icing on the cake taking the mc as a 4 year old to practice combat, bruh.