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2/4/2/2/4 there are many places which feel like an A.I wrote them and also a lot of things seem forced and the choices thus far seem annoying especially given that the author tossed the MC in during tests has him act like they are important when there is so much potential elsewhere if he takes the right actions he can make some money before dropping out and training and maybe try and talk to the ancient one
In Marvel with the Perfect Body...
Aaron_Chong_6689
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that is something I can accept but the A.I text is annoying to read like it will use so many words to describe even the most mundane things it's like a person who lives completely in his own world
Aaron_Chong_6689:Def no ancient one stuff, plus mc doesn't even know about her or her powers
I have a new way, and it's actually good this time, just read the latest chapter and tell me what you think. Dont skip chapters now
AlexCyberHeart:that is something I can accept but the A.I text is annoying to read like it will use so many words to describe even the most mundane things it's like a person who lives completely in his own world
I read a little bit further but I will just say it's not my thing and leave it at that . I hope you improve as you write further and become good at writing
Aaron_Chong_6689:I have a new way, and it's actually good this time, just read the latest chapter and tell me what you think. Dont skip chapters now