Review Detail of Blacky_Guy in Ephemeral Elysium: The Harem Chronicles

Author Here, I am trying to write this Novel which has full R-rated fight scenes and sex scenes that will revolve around our main characters and other minor Characters. I am trying to write to my full potential but my personal life is quite interfering and as right now I am a student. I have held my other novel projects and am solely focusing on this project. The main problem is that English is my 3-4 language and because of this, the things that I think to include in a Novel become. like Expectations vs reality. You may find it weird or hard as English is not my first language. So, I hope you will enjoy this Novel and comment, on what you think about it.