That was fun to read, it kinda reminds me the old times where I was in the lan houses, playing Mu, Counter Strike, and having that competition. It has room for improvement, in the overall aspects of the novel, but nothing a good rewrite don't fix it. Keep up the good work, miss Orange :)
SayofChains88
Liked it!
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