Review Detail of Raphis in Wanderer system

Alright, it's quite tragic for Yahkel's life, only a few chapters in, and you've already introduced some surprising events for the readers. It's quite saddening. But I think that's one of the weaknesses of this novel. I actually like Yahkel's character and his positive and diligent attitude, but his life is turning out to be quite tragic. You're doing great, my friend, keep on writing.