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This has the unhidden smell of a Chinese MTL. From the over-the-top exaggerating to the awkwardly correct grammar, it stinks of being an MTL. Commentators and paragraphs constantly referring to some players's move as if it's an active skill in an MMO: "Look at Dirk, that's his unstoppable 'One-legged fadeaway jumpshot'! Incredible!" "Dirk drives into the paint, comes to a stop and does his 'One-legged fadeaway jumpshot' It's unguardable!" What a shame.
Super Basketball System
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Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts on my novel. I appreciate your feedback and understand that everyone has their own preferences when it comes to storytelling. I understand that this style may not be to everyone's taste, and I respect your opinion. I value the diversity of perspectives, and I'm open to constructive criticism. If there are specific aspects you believe could be improved or if you have any suggestions, I would be interested in hearing them. Ultimately, I hope readers can find enjoyment in the various storytelling approaches that literature has to offer. Thank you again for sharing your thoughts.