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2024-02-11 21:20

probably why some readers decided to drop this was the reincarnation tag, as chapter 57 passed he's still normal nothing special still no memories of his past life and still unaware he is reincarnated (reason: i read in some chapter comments that author said his memories was erased by the god who reincarnated him can't recall if it was mentioned in the story though or was never mentioned at all about the god erasing his memory). The question is when/at which volume or chapter will he realize he is reincarnated?,,, was it early chaps., middle chap., or at the latter chap... well, about the story: feels rush to me, a lot of skipped scene like catching pichu as knowing his pokemons background will make me more attached/emersed to them and mc's journey, also the characters reactions like his uncle after the mc come out of the tower, how does his mothers feel after him seeing her naked and many more if there is.

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