The story is good but the situations and the incidents were made really fast forward which made one to overlap with the other. I prefer the author to describe each and every situation and happenings in the story so that readers can read it more easily. Work well with your novel, in future it will become great.
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MÖGENShooting_Mushroom:are you a reviwer, then could you review my story. voyage through death cursed existence