Review Detail of Joao_Pires in Harem in the Fantasy World

Item: Harem in the Fantasy World
Rating: 3

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Joao_PiresLv48mthJoao_Pires

Author, you have to be consistant in your characters. If you said that he watched the anime, there are simple points that must not fail. I watched it many years ago and remember it better than the MC that just finished watching it. Also, you have to make spaces between words, it is really hard to read.

Harem in the Fantasy World

IsekaiMind

Liked it!

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Joao_PiresLv4Joao_Pires

I'm sorry if my review sounds rude, is just that I got really happy that someone was doing a fanfic for this novel/anime and the first chapters kinda disapointed me.

8mth

Joao_PiresLv4Joao_Pires

Like, changing classes was one of the most important points of his system and he managed to forget it. If it continues like this you should have just written that he didn't watch the anime.

8mth