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This book has the themes of medieval times, princesses, and an arranged marriage. Absolutely everything that I adore in a book! The concepts are well-executed, creating an enjoyable read for the readers! However, I noticed that there are some adjustments that can be made in the storytelling like info-dumping, grammar, and other minimal errors that can be easily edited by the author! Overall, I like this book but further polishing will make it better! Thank you for the amazing read, dear Author!
Peony Flower Farm
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Hello and thank you for your honest and straightforward feedback and comments. I really appreciate your honesty while I am doubtful of my story. The positive one is I'll continue to nurture and use it. The negative one is I'll use these as my stepping stone to improve more of my lapses, mistakes, and errors. Additional of it was to hone it to make my errors will sharpen than last time. I'll take for this, thank you so much.