Review Detail of Tiffanytrawers in Cocktails and Cauldrons: A Magical Mayhem

So far, I think you are doing great. Maybe cut back on taking help from Ai a bit since they usually makes a dead story while human author write an alive one. You are using Ai tools, nonono don't deny it, and it's making the these couple of chapters a bit zombish. Anyways, all I would say is that you should keep up the good work and that hurry up and write more.