Review Detail of Abeeba in Cocktails and Cauldrons: A Magical Mayhem

You do know that almost 80% yuri is soft? Those that try to add hardcore yuri usually ends up being accused of making a Mary Sue or something. Also, personally I think making a Whole world out there before sending the MC into the canon events is a good idea too. Not saying I feel offended or something, but did you really have to give 3.5 so early in the writing. Maybe waited a bit more to see if it's to your taste or not. Maybe didn't write a review for a while and when the book was around 50 or 60 chapter then write a review. By then, I think, a lot of other reviews will be there. Low review usually makes author stop writing you know.

when i say "soft magic novel" what i mean is that the magic system they should use is the "soft magic system" there is generally to kinds of magic system you can use when writing there is the "soft magic system" think harry potter and lord of the rings and then there is the "hard magic system" think hunter x hunter and naruto. now that thats out of the way sorry you feel offended but i'm not sorry for giving my honest opinion and reviewed it according to my opinion of its quality if i recall correctly i gave it a 5 on writing quality a 5 on stability of updates a 2 on story development a 2 on character design and a 4 on world background. and i really doubt that the story is just gonna do a 180 and suddenly start not being filled with filler stuff and even if it does a story should not take 50 or 60 decently sized chapters to grip a persons attention

No,no,no. You got it all wrong!!! I am not offended! It's just that I have observed that when a novel gets bad review early on, the authors kinda drop it and I don't wanna see that. Sorry, if MY comments may jave offended you. And seriously, I still don't get the soft and hard type you were saying.

come on guys, don't argue.and can anyone tell me what exactly is the filler. the trip part? or the Scooby doo part?or the system explanation part?or the Veela reservoir part?tell me and I will do my best to reduce the filler chapters

Don't worry I'm not offended :) . the soft and hard type is different ways you can write a magic system if you want to know more just google "what is soft and hard magic systems"

i don't know if I would call any of those parts filler (but you could have put some of the system stuff in an auxiliary chapter instead) its more so how they were written that feels like filler to me. stuff like how most of chapter 6 is spent describing the dining room and the food she eats or telling us that they talked but only 4 lines of not even them speaking just the mother telling her something. most of this story so far has mostly been exposition(you telling us stuff) or telling us that people talked with each other instead of writing the conversations and if someone is actually speaking it has mostly been one person talking at someone without any conversation actually happening but there has been more of people actually speaking to each other starting from chapter 12

also all of this is jut what i think/feel so feel free to ignore