Review Detail of Normal_Dude in TVD/TO: The Original Husband

Story is pretty good the Harry Potter incorporation is truly great well done to the author on that front. Only problem I have with the story is Chapter 17 after Mc suffered an insuferable amount of trials to reunite with his lover, he finds her in the act with another man. Something rather normal as he was believed to be dead for thousands of years but the fact that the author decided to flesh out the s*x scene when Mc x Rebeccah s*x scene was left to readers imagination left to be desired. It makes me believe either the author enjoys seeing Mc suffer or is a c*ck. I truly despised that chapter and would recommend anyone reading this story to completely skip it. As it is simple cause for unecessary heart ache. But a scene doesn’t define a story as a whole so the story is still worth reading as long as you skip/rush over chapter 17.