Review Detail of One_Shot_MAN in Vampire Headsman

It's been a while since I have enjoyed a novel, The starting three chapters are well written.I know that it's not perfect, The author had focussed more on the details and less on the character's thoughts and dialogues.The structure could also be improved a lot and paragraph could be shortened.However, despite that I will give author A for effort. I like the writing style which is rather poetic, the story also sounds promising.