Review Detail of Alias_scaleheart in Bleach: From You to Me

Item: Bleach: From You to Me
Rating: 5

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Alias_scaleheartLv151yrAlias_scaleheart

so far the story is off to a great start, all be it we are still only at the beginning stages, chapter 6. Grammar is fairly good, and the characters so far seem like actual characters and not machines. the Author so far seems to have been doing there homework, most of the background lore and info have been accurate with only some minor misunderstandings every now and then but even then this small mistakes really don't matter at all. So good job author and keep up the good work.

Bleach: From You to Me

AKD_Khmer

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AKD_KhmerAutorAKD_Khmer

Could you point out some misunderstandings? I felt like I missed some stuff too. If not, it's cool. Pretty sure people will rip into me soon.

1yr

Alias_scaleheartLv15Alias_scaleheart

I wouldn't really worry about it, the only things I can really point out is the gangs that were present then. because most were listed and during that time was there prime do to the constant wars and fights. but even then they didn't really matter much so I wouldn't even worry about.

1yr

AKD_KhmerAutorAKD_Khmer

Thanks for letting me know. I appreciate the feedback.

Alias_scaleheart:I wouldn't really worry about it, the only things I can really point out is the gangs that were present then. because most were listed and during that time was there prime do to the constant wars and fights. but even then they didn't really matter much so I wouldn't even worry about.

1yr

NexusPrimodiusLv4NexusPrimodius

is it harem

1yr

Alias_scaleheartLv15Alias_scaleheart

I don't know, right now the main guy has two female students. but there isnt any implied romance, and one of them is his adopted daughter.

NexusPrimodius:is it harem

1yr