To be honest, very early reviews are a gamble. Only after at least 10 chapters can you deduce what this story is coming to. Although, from what I read, I can already see where the author is going and what the story is about. I call that a win. Just don't put too many flashbacks, time skips, and pov changes(in one chapter?!). If you do, just try to divide them into multiple chapters, that gives you content, and might make it clearer for other readers. other than that, nice job author :)

The story is dark and some narrations include violence but I like how the author considers the reader's emotions! Writing is good and though it has only two chapters, its a good read already. Wonder how the story will unfold^^

Overall it’s hard to say too much about the quality of this book since it’s so early on, but I’m interested! The writing is lax, which will be appealing for some readers and less so for others. The characters and where they’re going has left me intrigued, and I think it’s worth giving this a read on that alone!

First of all, the writing is good. I can tell that the writer is pretty talented. The plot idea is a unique one and the characters are relatable. Keep up the good work.