Review Detail of CasuallyPolite in Deadric GOD of the Abyss

Choice of words is quite unique on this platform, but the format of paragraphs doesn’t suit the app because each para is too long… Just shorten them out and everything would be great with the writing. The them is generic, though immersive at the same time. I can tell that this book needs a little polishing in future chapters, and it would become a hidden gem in the future. Better yet, this might give plenty experience to the new author for future works down the line. Keep it up, author!