Review Detail of Toni_Yunanto in Dragon's Flight: A Tale of Ancient Skies

The novel synopsis for “Dragon’s Flight: The Key to Ancients” is intriguing, but it could be improved by adding more clarity and specificity. The synopsis does not introduce the main characters or their goals, which makes it hard to connect with them or care about their journey. The synopsis also does not explain what the ancient scroll is, why it is important, or how it relates to the legendary dragon. The synopsis could be more engaging by providing some details about the world of Eldoria, the challenges and dangers that the characters face, and the stakes of their quest. A possible improved synopsis could be something like this: Eldoria is a land of magic and mystery, where dragons soar in the skies and ancient secrets lie hidden in the depths. Lila, a young scholar, has always dreamed of finding the legendary dragon that is said to be the guardian of Eldoria. When she stumbles upon an ancient scroll in a forgotten library, she discovers that it holds the key to unlocking the dragon’s power. But she is not the only one who wants the scroll. A ruthless warlord, who seeks to conquer Eldoria with his army of dark creatures, is also after it. Lila must team up with Kian, a brave warrior, and Zara, a cunning thief, to embark on a perilous journey across Eldoria. Along the way, they will face deadly enemies, hidden traps, and unexpected allies. Will they be able to reach the dragon before it is too late? Find out in “Dragon’s Flight: The Key to Ancients”, a thrilling fantasy adventure full of dragons, magic, and danger.