There are no obvious spelling errors, at least I haven't found any so far, the update is stable and the story development makes sense, not much to say about the character design. I'm not giving 5 stars because it's still too early to reach a conclusion, the character's actions are consistent with what was established and shown from the beginning of the story, the story is worth reading.
CarrionNewt
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