Review Detail of Warmaisach in No Medicine For Regret

2.6 The novel is written in a style that makes readers confused and makes them reread paragraphs over and over again to see what has actually happened in it. This takes the readers out of the flow, and it makes it harder for them to retain the information from previous paragraphs. The description of Ava was good, but several grammatical mistakes and typos ruin the experience. "a just a moment" "Further east THEN east" "Her cloths were tattered" "Easily finding footing a low hanging branch" "this figureD moved forward" Then, there are also grammar issues. "Making her pace through the night" "A crack sounded out" If you don't care enough to put your novel through a spell-checker, why should we care?