Review Detail of Septic_Red in PAUSED FOR QQC

The story is a common one on this vast sea of genres. It possesses some good characters and a general good plot to entertain your boring life. The pacing seem to be alright. But the grammar is something that should be worked on regularly. Thankfully there are several tools who can help in this case, but who do I judge on grammar that even I am having big trouble since English is my second language.