Review Detail of OtherShore_Asura in I'm Supergirl in a Weird Crossover!? (DC x Twilight)

So, far I've read the whole thing up to Chapter 11. The start was a bit iffy for me, a bit rushed but that's pretty much how a lot of fics go so not that big of a deal, you've clearly improved in the latest chapies. Still a bit sad that you didn't give her original Kara's memories but that's okay I suppose since she has meta knowledge. I'm curious to see how you develop this fic continuing forward are you going to keep it lighthearted throughout with hints of the dark DC world peaking through or is it going to progressively get Darker, I do hope it doesn't get too dark though this is a breath of fresh air with a MC that's not a murder hobo and not a total super Sue that knows how to do everything. Also, really love what you did with Bella, it's a pretty unique solution hoping to see the comedic scenes involving that brought up. *Spolier* Now for the crux of the fic, freaking superheroes man, Bella hit the mark with that guess of her's in the original novel. Rosalie and Alice are superb and I'm assuming at least the some wolves like Leah and Sam might join along with Bella. Kara could make her own Superhero Girls Squad. I'm also curious about the love interest is it going to be like a harem of girls, so far we got a few candidates. Also who's going to be her Archnemesis and so curious. Anyways Keep up the goodwork can't wait for the nxt chapies.