You know those super awkward MCs written by white people? The type that constantly asks himself questions inside his own head or even out loud talks to himself? Take that MC and add a portion of depression and a hint of virtue signaling and you will get the MC of this story. In the beginning you won't really notice but as the story goes on it becomes very annoying.
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MÖGENI see. They aren't really talking to themselves in those stories though. They are narrating. Death Note, yes there you have a lot of thoughts being voiced but there is a purpose to having those as they are directly tied to the plot and explaining what is going on. I don't think I was was talking about stuff like that in my review.
FinnsRevenge:Re:Zero, just googled it. Kabnari of the iron fortress, Code Geass, id argue death note as well. All of these characters talk to themselves and question themselves. I'm pulling from actual funded and released to the public media for my generalization. What are you using aside from fanfiction? It sounds more like an issue with the storytelling and youre just not a fan of internal monolog thats rampant in fanfiction and less to do with a white or nonwhite author
CarlosDr3vna:White people??? I'm half Mexican, half Hispanic. Also not sure what the race of the author has to do with writing a story.
But you were wrong. I'm not white. Also, dug through your comments. You seem to have a hatred towards Indians and have a habit of bringing race into matters that don't entail it. A racist pretty much.Ergo, this will probably be my last comment to you since I don't argue with illogical people. Apologies that you didn't enjoy the novel. I hope you find a better read elsewhere.
InternetSaint:I call it as I see it.
CarlosDr3vna:But you were wrong. I'm not white. Also, dug through your comments. You seem to have a hatred towards Indians and have a habit of bringing race into matters that don't entail it. A racist pretty much.Ergo, this will probably be my last comment to you since I don't argue with illogical people. Apologies that you didn't enjoy the novel. I hope you find a better read elsewhere.
sheesh this is ironic considering your username. I'm all for it🤣. I love trash destroying trash online. I know how humanity ends and spend my time looking at it's agents.
InternetSaint:I call it as I see it.
PeerlessLoner:sheesh this is ironic considering your username. I'm all for it🤣. I love trash destroying trash online. I know how humanity ends and spend my time looking at it's agents.
he's not really saying you're white, he's saying your story feels like those written by white people.
CarlosDr3vna:White people??? I'm half Mexican, half Hispanic. Also not sure what the race of the author has to do with writing a story.
I'm not trying to defend anything, but why's this racism but when someone badmouths chinese for their low quality novels everyone just agrees?
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It's impressive how the 3k moments in your feed consist of unpleasant comments and 1-star reviews, I don't understand how there are such unhappy people, you hate your life so much that you feel the need to do less to other people. Another thing I noticed is that despite being so critical you don't have a story of your own, ironic.
Victor_Venegas:It's impressive how the 3k moments in your feed consist of unpleasant comments and 1-star reviews, I don't understand how there are such unhappy people, you hate your life so much that you feel the need to do less to other people. Another thing I noticed is that despite being so critical you don't have a story of your own, ironic.