Review Detail of Xerzxes in War On Man

Writing quality : could use some improve but it’s over all good. Updating : you should probably update more than just 2 chap a week but you may be busy irl so it’ fine I guess Story : The story develops really smoothly Character : the characters seem hard to visualize maybe add some of like their characteristics external features include a character's height, weight, body type, and general appearance The world background is good