I have yet to read the story but I saw this comment. I recommened using Grammarly to help you with this. You don’t have to buy the memebership but even then it saves a lot of time when making content.
AstralCartoon:I really appreciate your support, I know I have a lot of grammatical errors, but I have done the first chapters in a hurry for reasons, so I have not had time to do a few drafts. I promise to raise the quality of my grammar, just be patient.image