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Item: Heroic Gems
Rating: 3

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Laughing_Fox_9871Lv11yrLaughing_Fox_9871

You developed story lightly but world building need more information. overall it is going in right direction but you still need to improve the worldbuilding in it you can watch world building videos online on you tube Great work keep writing.

Heroic Gems

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ZedCodeAutorZedCode

Thank you, they haven't started to real adventure yet so I didn't think I needed to talk about the world building and stuff.

1yr

ZedCodeAutorZedCode

the real adventure*

ZedCode:Thank you, they haven't started to real adventure yet so I didn't think I needed to talk about the world building and stuff.

1yr