Review Detail of Bankets in The Awaited One

The writing style is unique in a way. However, there are some punctuations issue that can be easily fixed if you edit even though the chapters felt quite short. The pace seems to be just right, not too fast but not too slow either. Author-san seems to have a consistent schedule of upload so there's that. As for the world background, it's still too early to judge so I will come back later when there are more chapters. All in all, for someone who's starting as an author, you've done a pretty good job. Just don't forget that there's still a lot to improve.