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Bunny_Bunny_3876
Bunny_Bunny_3876Lv151yr
2023-06-03 03:27

Good storytelling. This is the first time I came across a plot that involves AI tech. I like the idea and I am eager to see how this plays out. I am only eight chapters into it, but the novel has enormous potential.

Strongest Android System

Yuliaresi_Anjelina
4.9
240 Chs

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Yuliaresi_Anjelina
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Thanks for the great review. Stay tuned for more!

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This is a very well-written start of a promising sci-fi adventure. The premise is very intriguing, blending tried and tested genres like system, game elements, and AI uprising in a new and original way, with a lot of potential for exciting future developments. I especially liked the mystery and ambiguity of the moral conflict between humans and adroids, and the unique perspective of the main character, Noa, on all of it. Good luck to the author and here's hoping for hundreds more chapters! :]

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The_Sweet_Sparrow
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I am astounded by your writing and ingenuity, Author-Nim. I earnestly hope that you continue creating great content and keep this story going. It is a unique troupe. The characters, plot, and all else in the novel are remarkable. You merit five stars for this work!

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Kiyoka_San
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So far, I’m very interested in the overall concept! It reminds me a lot of The Terminator, where AI has gone insane. But with an all-new twist, and I can’t wait to see how this story goes! Good luck, Author!

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Raja1997
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i have read several system novel but so far this novel is one of my favorite. worth to read. i cant wait for future update.

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MerrySweet
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With AI all over the place nowadays, that's a novel you'd want to try!Best of luck to you, dear author, keep up the good work!

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GoldenStache
GoldenStacheLv4

It's Good. Writing Quality: Some mistakes here and there, especially with dialogue but it's decent overall. Story Development: First chap hooked me in well, the ending killed the tension entirely though. Fifth chap is really rushed, but the events leading up to was pretty decent, except the interaction between Sorin and the mc. The introduction of the system was well done. Them planning things out when they met again was rushed again. It seems you have a problem with pacing. Character Design: I liked the mc's dad quite a lot, the author wrote him pretty well. The mc is mishmash of a battle junkie and a nerd. Sorin, is a bit boring but she's a good companion for the mc, they play well of each other's personalities. World Background: The world building is the highlight of this novel for me, I love sci-fi so I might be biased but the author did well here. Some concepts needed to be explained earlier but it would be fine after some editing. Overall its a good novel, albeit rushed in many areas, but its got great potential, keep up the good work.

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PeterPan
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Nice story... with good character design... release more chapters.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]...

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QueenFrieza
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AI and androids have always scared me for the exact reason portrayed in this story so far. Despite my fear of these things, I can't stop reading because of the beautifully flowing story and vivid details the author gives us. I find the MC to be likable right away and it makes the mysteries about him that slowly unravel the further you read that much sweeter with each revelation. Being thrown into action immediately was a good choice for a scifi novel. It allows you to experience shock right alongside MC and I appreciate that a lot. Update stability is really good and you can trust the quality of her work. As a scifi lover I want to hear even more about the world we've been dropped into but I can't complain so far. This book is just in the beginning of its journey and it will be so interesting to see how it pans out. A must read for scifi lovers!

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Sunny_Shumail
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With AI storming our world, it is only befitting to write a novel centred on it. The grammar and writing are almost flawless and the dialogues flow. ML is funny and smart which are always good characteristics to have because it keeps the readers hooked. Update stability is impressive and I am sure this book will do wonders. Wishing you good luck ✌️

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